ghost faced, rooms I paced,
hyper breath, close to death,
sweating, shaking, oh no,
what have I done? where should I go?
Only so much time, until
my soul is burnt in torturous hell
but I'm
forgiven
forever
though I am a sinner
Love has saved me
Explanation: As the poem turns in a positive direction, the lines are shorter. I also used alliteration with "forgiven" and "forever". The Poem has kind of an open end, the last line not really rhyming with anything. I guess this could possibly symbolize how we humans are all unsure of faith and where we will end up.
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