Form 1:
holding too much stress
so i sit at home and type
while watching tv
it's cool because Friends is on
my non serious poem
Form 2:
I hold my stress in a weighted heart
Relax and take a freaking break
It works, because I feel alright
my first new poem, that isn't deep
Form 3:
I sit at home and stress just melts
TV is pulling stress away
It's wierd that this is how I'm helped
but if it works, "that's cool", I say
Form 4:
freaky anxious stress will leave as
Ross and Rachel act for me and
I'm at home but it's OK cause
I don't like school anyways now
Form 5:
Missing my band class to sit on my bed, I can
stay and relax, watch TV in my room so I
Think on the fact that my poem's not deep enough
Feeling no stress as I watch the show Friends at home
Form 6:
In my room at my house as I sit and I type
I can feel all my hurt and my stress melt away
now I'm getting so sick of this freaking assignment
I'll watch Friends cause it's bearable, comfortable, nice
Final Comment:
I like form 6 of my poem best because it flows better that the others. I also like it because it shows my true colors; I use the word freaking while describing the assignment. Teehee. As I was rereading my poems, I had to do a TON of editing, so I hope I did it all right.
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